Being A Nobody...

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...isn´t that difficult. Though the attitude is, somehow. The hollidays are nearly gone, the world of employment is out there, awaiting some job to be done. Yawning... seems like the society blurb done by the public medias is more unmanagable than ever before ...at the moment. A spider web that loves to glue you at itself, for whatever reason. Money, resentment, nervousity, deadness, functionality, defiance of the individual, threatening by some kind of 'poultry'.

Loosen the reins blind policeman!


I am not going for a couple, a relationship, whatever. Just trying to have a look at a world that is always trying to suck in the individual men and trying to form crowds. The often mentioned 'system' is always doing its best to function undisturbed and fast. As if it is already a grudge: 'The Journey Is The Reward'. Lol somehow. That bit of freedom in tiny spaces, a feeling of paranoia and or agression.

Again: Keep your thoughts as free as possible!
Do not react, just act!
Speak out, even 'awkward' or unheard words!
The slight revolution will kill ´em


Thoughts!?

[link] Soak, Be A Nobody, Which really inspires!
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limarieinred's avatar
Redsterfish -

Thank you for submitting your work for critique.   

What stands out as areas of expertise are your use of words and formatting to accentuate the content and convey the emotional expression of the work. The fluency of the piece is very choppy, but that lends itself to the feeling of struggle and conflict.  

I think you may have meant holiday rather than holliday (like Doc Holliday the gunslinger, but in some ways that could lend an interesting meaning as well).    

This piece is contemporary and lends itself to current political and social discourse.  

Thank you again for sharing your work with us here.  We look forward to more work in our gallery!